*flails* This was perfect -- I've come to anticipate your updates as reliably good fic fixes, and this more than exceeded expectations. I love how it's both exactly what you want in a whorefic, but also full of little surprises as well -- I thought the scene with Miro's children was an especially brilliant touch. And the whole thing was just such a great revisioning of Lukas' struggles with disappointment and failure, and of quietlyconflicted!Miro. And oh lord, you included Miro's eh-ehhms -- I loved them so much it's unreal.
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Date: 2010-08-28 01:38 am (UTC)